Emily included the following passage in her report: "Other mid-price restaurants in the Chicago area have achieved phenomenal success by offering several vegetarian options on their menus.I suggest that Family Feast test whether this approach will benefit us by gradually rolling out new menu choices,one at a time,over a six-month period.We can then do customer surveys to determine how the new dishes have been received." What should Emily change to make her report more objective?
A) She should change the suggestion of a gradual,six-month rollout to an immediate overhaul of the menu.
B) She should eliminate the subjective step of following up with customer surveys.
C) She should replace the vague phrase "several vegetarian options" with the names of specific menu choices.
D) She should change the six-month rollout period to a six-week period to obtain results more quickly.
E) She should change "achieved phenomenal success" to "improved customer satisfaction."

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More than positivity,you should project objectivity-the sense that you are providing information,analysis,and advice that is sound,reliable,and unbiased.When the tone of a report projects excessive enthusiasm and perhaps a rush to action or when it uses exaggerated phrases such as "phenomenal success," it conveys an imprecise,unprofessional approach.

Emily Included the Following Passage in Her Report: "Other Mid-Price