Ethan Hill who works for Small Steps,a child rights organization,is writing a proposal as part of the Literacy Campaign he is working on.The proposal is written for a top-notch multinational company to provide funds for the purchase of computers for underprivileged school children in Taiwan.Which of the following dictions should Hill be using in his proposal?
A) "The campaign has massive potential to tackle illiteracy in Chung-li city of Taiwan."
B) "The campaign will transform the current education system in Chung-li city."
C) "The campaign will help educate children of 20 schools in Chung-li city."
D) "We feel that the campaign will educate children of 20 schools in Chung-li city."
E) "I believe the campaign has huge capacity to transform the education system of Taiwan."

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While writing a proposal, one should avoid "believing" diction and instead use facts and figures. One should also avoid bragging about oneself or an idea or concept used in a proposal.

Ethan Hill Who Works for Small Steps,a Child Rights Organization,is