Business English 10th Edition by Mary Ellen Guffey,Carolyn Seefer

تمرين 42

Skill Check 2.3 Writing Concise Sentences
In the space provided, rewrite the following sentences to make them more concise.
1. There is a free booklet that shows all the new changes in employee benefits.
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2. In view of the fact that health care benefits are being drastically altered, this is to inform you that an orientation meeting will be scheduled in the near future.
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3. The reason why we are attending the protest is to make our opinions perfectly clear.
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4. In the event that McDonald's offers new menu items for the purpose of increasing sales, experts think that there is every reason to believe that the effort will be successful.
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5. There will be a special showing of the orientation training film scheduled at 10 a.m. due to the fact that there were so few in number who were able to attend the first showing.
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6. This is to give you advance warning that we plan to alter or change the procedures for submitting travel expenses in the very near future.
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7. I am writing this e-mail message to let you know that each and every employee is invited to attend our holiday banquet.
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8. You might be interested to learn that accounting mistakes this past fiscal year were few in number.
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9. My personal opinion is that you understand the basic fundamentals of our operations.
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10. Please give consideration to the very unique skills I have to offer your organization.
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