Business Communication 8th Edition by Amy Newman,Scot Ober

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Stress the "you" attitude in a paragraph.
Revise the following paragraph to make the reader the center of attention.
We are happy to announce that we are offering for sale an empty parcel of land at the corner of Mission and High Streets. We will be selling this parcel for $89,500, with a minimum down payment of $22,500. We have had the lot rezoned M-2 for student housing. We originally purchased this lot because of its proximity to the university and had planned to erect student housing, but our investment plans have changed. We still believe that our lot would make a profitable site for up to three 12-unit buildings.