Business Communication 8th Edition by Amy Newman,Scot Ober

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Proofread part of a report.
Assume that the following passage is part of an informational report that you have prepared. Proofread it carefully for spelling errors, misused words, and grammar errors. Rewrite the passage showing the corrections you made.
Our lawyers have reviewed the wording of the contacts you sent us. They're advise is to except provisions 1 thru 8 and 11 thorough 15. The remainder of the provisions (9 and 10) require farther negotiation.
The number of people we want to include in these talks has not yet been determined. We do expect, however, to have fewer people involved now then in our proceeding meetings.
Marcia Nash, our chief legal council, will be your principal contact during these negotiations. Please telephone her at 555-7376 to sit a mutually beneficial time for us too meet early next month. We are eager to settle this matter soon.