Deck 2: Technical Sentences

Question 1

Select the correct sequence of activities when revising sentences:

A) Check grammar and mechanics, edit for conciseness, edit for clarity, edit for gender-neutral language, find the real verb, find the real subject.
B) Find the real verb, find the real subject, edit for clarity, edit for conciseness, edit for gender-neutral language, check grammar and mechanics.
C) Find the real subject, find the real verb, edit for conciseness, edit for clarity, edit for gender-neutral language, check grammar and mechanics.
D) Check grammar and mechanics, find the real subject, find the real verb, edit for conciseness, edit for gender-neutral language, edit for clarity.

Answer 1

C

Question 2

Which of the following is NOT true about the "subject"?

A) It is the thing that is acted upon in the sentence.
B) It is the thing that makes the action in the sentence happen.
C) It refers to the topic of the sentence.
D) It is best placed at the start of the sentence.

Answer 2

A

Question 3

Which of the following sentences does NOT contain a weak expletive?

A) It is advisable to wear sun protection when working outdoors.
B) Many vendors are currently active in the province.
C) It is not expected that we pay immediately.
D) There are two fire exits east of the lab.

Answer 3

B

Question 4

Which of the following sentences is in the active voice?

A) In the last six months, no job offers were made by management.
B) The instrument was carefully calibrated by the engineer.
C) The workers wore protective gear.
D) The room was entered by the painting crew.

Question 5

Which of the following is true about passive voice?

A) It is clear and concise.
B) It makes the writer seem more competent and objective.
C) It should be used when you need to address your reader directly.
D) It can be used when you don't care or don't know who the agent is.

Question 6

Which of the following sentences uses the imperative mood?

A) You should refuse their offer today.
B) Please do not perform tie-ins during the summer months.
C) The report must be submitted in triplicate hardcopy.
D) All efforts should be made to ensure that water is discharged onto landscaped or pervious areas.

Question 7

Which of the following sentences does NOT contain verb nominalizations?

A) The completion and submission of trip reports should be undertaken by team leaders.
B) Our firm is in agreement with the notion that we will give assistance to the external compliance-audit.
C) The research teams must discuss how best to analyze the soil samples.
D) This investigation recommends that modification be made to the product to increase consumer safety.

Question 8

Which of the following is an example of a verb nominalization?

A) perform a demonstration
B) during the period of
C) proximity
D) gain access to

Question 9

"During the month of April" is an example of ________.

A) verb nominalization
B) imperative mood
C) passive voice
D) wordiness

Question 10

On average, your sentences should be no more than ________.

A) 40 words long
B) 20 words long
C) 10 words long
D) It doesn't matter how long they are, as long as the subject is clear.

Question 11

Which of the following sentences does NOT contain redundancies?

A) If the symptoms still persist, call me.
B) We used off-the-shelf components.
C) The chemist mixed together the reagents.
D) We won't proceed at the present time.

Question 12

Which of the following is NOT true about jargon?

A) They are an easy shorthand that can be useful in technical writing.
B) They can be annoying and inappropriate.
C) They have a tendency to make sentences excessively long.
D) They are terms and expressions unique to a specific discipline.

Question 13

"Administer," "substantiate," and "ascertain" are all examples of _________.

A) passive constructions
B) imperative voice
C) redundancies
D) big words

Question 14

"Interface," "synergy," and "conspicuous" are all examples of ________.

A) jargon
B) gerunds
C) active voice
D) big and possibly confusing words

Question 15

When the subject's gender is unknown, which technique should you avoid?

A) changing the subject to a plural
B) changing the sentence so that pronouns are unnecessary
C) using a plural pronoun (i.e. they, their)
D) using the terms he/she or him/her

Question 16

"Police officer," "firefighter," and "actor" are all examples of ________.

A) sexist language
B) inclusive language
C) gerunds
D) jargon

Question 17

The phrase "triangular in shape" is an example of ________.

A) nominalization
B) jargon
C) redundancy
D) all of the above

Question 18

The phrase "it has been noted that" is an example of ________.

A) wordiness
B) redundancy
C) a passive construction
D) imperative construction

Question 19

Addressing the reader directly using "you" ________.

A) should be avoided because it signifies lack of objectivity
B) is an example of active voice
C) is an example of passive voice
D) should be avoided because it is considered impolite

Question 20

A weak expletive is ________.

A) a meaningless expression that takes the place of the main noun and verb
B) an expression you use when the object of the sentence is unknown
C) a politically correct alternative to swearing
D) something that should never be used under any circumstances

Question 21

Which of the following is true about active voice?

A) It is overly aggressive and should be avoided.
B) It contains a subject that precedes the verb.
C) It is required in every sentence.
D) It makes the writer sound less objective.

Question 22

Identify the real subject in the following sentence:
The decision of the engineers was to double the chlorine concentration in the water treatment process.

A) chlorine
B) engineers
C) decision of the engineers
D) water treatment process

Question 23

Identify the real subject in the following sentence:
The drainage of runoff should be directed onto pervious ground.

A) drainage
B) runoff
C) directed
D) ground

Question 24

The following sentence suffers from ________.
The investigation into the Johal noise complaint was conducted on May 15.

A) use of passive voice
B) lack of a clear subject
C) too much jargon
D) a verb nominalization

Question 25

The following sentence suffers from ________.
The head of each tech unit should check his e-manual for automatic updates, which are frequent.

A) wordiness
B) lack of a clear subject
C) a run-on sentence
D) lack of inclusive language

Question 26

Technical sentences generally work best if the grammatical subject appears prominently in the middle of the sentence.

Question 27

Technical paragraphs should not begin with their topic sentence.

Question 28

A technical writer should, whenever possible, make the grammatical subject a real person or something concrete.

Question 29

Technical writers tend to overuse the active voice.

Question 30

The passive voice communicates a writer's objectivity.

Question 31

When the agent of an action is unknown or irrelevant, the writer should use the passive voice.

Question 32

Command voice, imperative mood, and "you-understood" voice are the same thing.

Question 33

Nominalizations should be avoided in technical writing.

Question 34

The imperative mood is at odds with the active voice.

Question 35

Technical writers should not replace nominalizations with simple, direct verbs.

Question 36

On average, technical paragraphs should not exceed 7 lines.

Question 37

The phrase "it has been noted that" should always be avoided.

Question 38

Breaking up noun chains goes against a basic principle of technical writing.

Question 39

Never compel readers to look up one of your words in a dictionary.

Question 40

Technical writers are not compelled to use inclusive language.

Question 41

Describe the meaning of the word "subject." Where should the subject go in a sentence? Why?

Question 42

Describe what a "weak expletive" is. In what situations is it acceptable to use a weak expletive?

Question 43

Why do technical people have a tendency to overuse the passive voice? Why can overuse of the passive voice be problematic?

Question 44

What is the active voice? Why is it preferable to the passive voice?

Question 45

Why are short sentences generally preferred over long ones? Name one situation in which making a sentence longer is acceptable.

Question 46

Define redundancy as it pertains to writing. Why should redundancy be avoided?

Question 47

What is "jargon"? Provide three examples of jargon used in your field of study and some words or phrases with which they can be replaced.

Question 48

Describe four ways you can revise a sentence when you are unsure of the subject's gender.

Question 49

Identify the problem contained within each of the following sentences. Revise the sentences so that they follow the principles of good technical writing.
a) My tools were lost by the intern.
b) It can be challenging to teach work safety.
c) A new shift schedule needs to be organized by the team.
d) Your own pencils, ink pens, and calculators should be brought to the exam.

Question 50

Rewrite the following sentences to make them more direct. Keep the meaning of the original.
a) Dehydration, it was decided by the committee, is the number one problem facing production workers working on the factory floor.
b) As of today, I have not received your application. Once I have received it, I can see about an interview.
c) Grade adjustments that become necessary after May 1 can only be made in consultation with the program chair.
d) It has been recently brought to my attention that readers, having read your report, have further questions.

Question 51

Explain the difference between active and passive voice and the reasons why you might use one over the other in a technical writing scenario.

Question 52

When editing sentences, what does it mean to "find the real subject"? How can you achieve this? Why is finding the real subject important in technical writing?

Question 53

Describe the steps involved in writing for clarity and its significance to technical writing.