Lesikar's Business Communication: Connecting in a Digital World 13th Edition by Kathryn Rentz,Paula Lentz

Exercise 24

Revise the following poorly written message so that the message is clear and direct and has an appropriate tone and style. You may add information if you need to for the message to make sense. Be sure to fix any grammar, mechanics, punctuation, or word choice errors.
Employees are taking too long of breaks. This must stop immediately so that we don't lose productivity. If we lose productivity, we could lose customers, and you could lose your job.
Remember that you get 15 minutes in the morning and 15 in the afternoon. You get 30 minutes for lunch. This means you don't leave early, and it doesn't mean you take 30 minutes to eat and then take another 5 or 10 to get back to work. This means you get back to work after 30 minutes. Also, this means that when you are working, you are not allowed to be on Facebook or email for personal reasons. This has lead to alot of waste time, to.
I know all of you care about your jobs. If their is any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for all of your hard work. It is appreciated.