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Effective Writing 10th Edition by Claire May,Gordon May
Edition 10ISBN: 978-0133579499Effective Writing 10th Edition by Claire May,Gordon May
Edition 10ISBN: 978-0133579499 Exercise 1
Revise the following sentences so that they are written as simply and concisely as possible. Be alert for hidden verbs.
1. We should not make reference to projections that are unrealistic in our plan.
2. These techniques will provide for an improved control of inventory.
3. This is to acknowledge receipt of your letter of April 30.
4. We will endeavor to complete your returns prior to April 15.
5. I am in need of improved writing skills.
6. In conclusion, I would like to state that I feel this seminar is an excellent opportunity.
7. There are several benefits that can come from attending the seminar.
8. Per the discussion held with you during our recent visit, there are several control objectives within the above-mentioned cycles that need to have techniques established or refined to assure that these objectives are met.
9. Utilization of linear models alone may lead to unnecessary limitations as to the inferences that one may be able to draw from the data.
10. This method provides proper allocation of costs.
1. We should not make reference to projections that are unrealistic in our plan.
2. These techniques will provide for an improved control of inventory.
3. This is to acknowledge receipt of your letter of April 30.
4. We will endeavor to complete your returns prior to April 15.
5. I am in need of improved writing skills.
6. In conclusion, I would like to state that I feel this seminar is an excellent opportunity.
7. There are several benefits that can come from attending the seminar.
8. Per the discussion held with you during our recent visit, there are several control objectives within the above-mentioned cycles that need to have techniques established or refined to assure that these objectives are met.
9. Utilization of linear models alone may lead to unnecessary limitations as to the inferences that one may be able to draw from the data.
10. This method provides proper allocation of costs.
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