Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey

Exercise 69

Use proofreading marks (see Appendix A) to correct errors and omissions in the following sentences. All errors must be corrected to receive credit for the sentence. Check with your instructor for the answers.
1. E-mails must be written clear and concise, to ensure that receivers comprehend the message quick.
2. Our next sales campaign of course must target key decision makers.
3. In the meantime our online sales messages must include more then facts testimonials and guarantees.
4. The Small Business Administration which provide disaster loans are establishing additional offices in Miami New Orleans and Biloxi.
5. Because we rely on e-mail we have reduced our use of faxes, and voice messages.
6. In business time is money.
7. "The first product to use a bar code" said Alice Beasley "was Wrigley's gum."
8. In 1908, the Model T went into production in Henry Ford's plant in Detroit Michigan.
9. As Professor Perez predicted the resourceful well trained graduate was hired quick.
10. The company's liability insurance in view of the laws that went into effect January 1 need to be increased.