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Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey

Edition 10ISBN: 978-1305630567
book Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey cover

Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey

Edition 10ISBN: 978-1305630567
Exercise 51
Your Task. Revise the following poorly written sentences and paragraphs. Use lists, bullets, and category headings, if appropriate. Improve parallel construction and reduce wordiness.
Revise the following by incorporating a numbered list.
Computer passwords are a way of life at this point in time. In the creation of a strong password, you should remember a few things. First, you should come up with an eight-word phrase that is easy to remember, such as this: my goal is a degree in 4 years. Then take each of those words and the first letter should be selected, such as this: mgiadi4y. The last step for creating a really strong password is to exchange-that is, swap out-some of those letters for characters and capital letters: Mgia$in4Y.
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