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book Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey cover

Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey

Edition 10ISBN: 978-1305630567
book Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey cover

Essentials of Business Communication 10th Edition by Dana Loewy,Mary Ellen Guffey

Edition 10ISBN: 978-1305630567
Exercise 40
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to position the bad news in a subordinate clause. ( Hint: Consider beginning the clause with Although.) Use passive voice verbs for the bad news.
The shipment of your last order was late for a reason. We had some really large orders that had to be filled ahead of yours and tied up our facilities. After that tie-up, we realized we had to improve our shipping process. Your next order will arrive within a week. That's a promise.
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