The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. They thought it was a strange, odd, and a mystery.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Question

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The list of descriptors, "strange," "odd," and "a mystery," is not parallel in structure. It should be revised to something like "strange, unusual, and mysterious" to maintain parallelism.

The Following Sentences Form an Essay