The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. Gradually, attitudes toward soap began to change and did not stay the same.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Question

Quizplus · Accepted Answer

The phrase "began to change and did not stay the same" is repetitive and can be condensed into "changed." This improves the clarity and conciseness of the sentence.

The Following Sentences Form an Essay