The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. In general, though, soap was sought after and many people wanted to get it.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Question

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The sentence could be made more concise by removing redundant elements, such as "though" or rephrasing to eliminate the repetition of "wanted" and "sought after," which convey similar meanings.

The Following Sentences Form an Essay