The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. Unfortunately, it was so expensive in price that only royalty like kings and queens could afford it.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Question

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The sentence can be made more concise by replacing "expensive in price" with simply "expensive."

The Following Sentences Form an Essay