The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. It may be, but results from two recent studies differ on this point and do not agree.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Question

Quizplus · Accepted Answer

The sentence could be made more concise by eliminating redundant phrases such as "differ on this point and do not agree," which essentially convey the same idea.

The Following Sentences Form an Essay