The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. Perhaps someday soon, researchers will have conclusive answers. For now, keeping sodium levels down is probably a good idea, particularly since there is no evidence that a low-sodium diet was harmful.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

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Quizplus · Accepted Answer

The sentence lacks consistency because it shifts from discussing future possibilities to present advice without a clear transition. Additionally, the phrase "was harmful" should be "is harmful" to maintain tense consistency.

The Following Sentences Form an Essay