The following sentences form a paragraph. Proofread them for inconsistent person and faulty parallelism. Identify the type of each error in each sentence, or select "correct" if the sentence is free of errors. Called chocolate crispies, these cookies were so good that customers praised them, and you would frequently ask for the recipe.
A) correct
B) inconsistent person
C) faulty parallelism

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The sentence shifts from a third-person perspective ("customers praised them") to a second-person perspective ("you would frequently ask for the recipe"), which is an example of inconsistent person.

The Following Sentences Form a Paragraph