The following sentences form a paragraph. For each pair, select the answer with more sentence variety. Which answer choice has sentence variety?
A) Michelle majored in sociology, the study of human behavior; her thesis explored race, success, and the black community. With her high grades and a maturing philosophy, Michelle attended Harvard Law School, graduated, and joined a Chicago law firm.
B) Michelle majored in sociology, the study of human social behavior. Her thesis explored race, success, and the black community. Michelle had high grades and a maturing point of view. She attended Harvard Law School. She graduated. She joined a Chicago law firm.

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Choice A includes a sentence with a semicolon and a sentence that begins with a preposition, which adds variety to the paragraph structure. Choice B contains mostly short and simple sentences without much variety in sentence structure.

The Following Sentences Form a Paragraph