Elaine asks, "Do you recycle Polyethylene Terephthalate plastics?" What words could she use that her audience would be more familiar with and improve the clarity of the question? (Hint: Polyethylene Terephthalate is the most common form of recyclable plastic and indicated on plastics with a "1.")
A) Do you recycle common plastics, like water and soda bottles?
B) Do you recycle plastic bottles, like water and soda bottles that have a number 1 on the bottom?
C) Do you recycle plastics that have a number 1 on the bottom?
D) All of the above are more effective and clear than Elaine's question.

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When determining what style to use, you have to determine your readers' knowledge of the subject. The reader's familiarity with the subject will determine how many specialized terms you can use. If the reader has a thorough knowledge of the subject, you can use acronyms, specialized nomenclature, and jargon that readers in a specific discipline regularly read and use. If the reader has little knowledge of the subject, limit the use of specialized vocabulary or perhaps define the terms. Another possibility is to substitute phrases or words that clearly express your meaning. To write concise sentences, use clear, concise words and phrases. Avoid using longer words when shorter ones will do just as well. (Write to express, not to impress.)

Elaine Asks, "Do You Recycle Polyethylene Terephthalate Plastics?" What Words