Which course of action most improves the following sentence?
HR had turned into such a bureaucratic mess that it was impossible to determine whose responsible for paychecks being issued a day late.
A)Change bureaucratic to beureaucratic.
B)Remove the word that.
C)Change paychecks to pay checks.
D)Change whose towho was.

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The sentence is most improved by changing whose towho was. Whose is a possessive; "whose responsibility" could be correct.

Which Course of Action Most Improves the Following Sentence