Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?

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Corrected version: to effect change.
Affect should be changed to effect. Effect and affect are often confused. As nouns, an effect is an outcome and an affect is a pretense, such as a fake accent. As verbs, to affect means to cause a change and to effect is to bring about. So effecting change affects the world, but speaking with an affect may not have the effect you intend.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited