Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?

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Corrected version: of him as discreet.
Discrete should be changed to discreet. Discrete objects come in units. Oranges are discrete; milk is not. A discreet person is careful with his or her words, often in the sense of being able to keep secrets.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited