Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?

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Corrected version: Gabriel went to the public library
The comma should be eliminated. This comma is out of place because the two clauses are not independent; Gabriel went to the library and Gabriel checked out The Stranger. If you are unsure whether or not a clause is independent, try to identify its subject.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited