Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?
A)His training regiment
B)includes jogging, cycling,
C)some light weight training
D)and a balanced diet.

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Corrected version: His training regimen
Regiment should be changed to regimen. A regimen is a program that someone follows, usually in exercise or medicine. A regiment is a military division.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited