"It had been agreed by most of the group that the Green Bay Packers had been believed to be the best team of the season."
Which of the following revisions should he recommend to the student in order to make the statement stronger?
A)The statementindicates excessive use of passive voice. Consider restructuring the sentence.
B)The statement is an opinion, which should always be avoided in reports.
C)The statement contains spelling errors that need to be corrected.
D)There is nothing wrong with the sentence.

Question

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The statement about the Green Bay Packers shows excessive use of passive voice. Mr. McCarthy should recommend that the student restructure the sentence to make it sound less confusing and read more fluidly.

"It Had Been Agreed by Most of the Group That