TD Bank Financial Group
Thom Hollis works as a financial advisor for TD Bank Financial Group. His job involves providing investment advice to many clients, in person or on the phone, and writing many letters and e-mails. He has an appointment tomorrow with Ji-Wan, a client, to review her personal investment portfolio. Before she comes in, Thom has to review her profile, decide what changes to suggest, and put together a proposed portfolio. He has a recent finance diploma, but because he is still relatively new to his job, he wants to collect as much information as he can on appropriate investments for her, so he decides to send an e-mail to Alyson, his manager, to see if she has any suggestions or advice. Besides preparing for his meeting with Ji-Wan, Thom has several other tasks he must work on.
-Thom is writing the first draft of a written proposal for a client. He notices that it seems a bit dense and unappealing. Which of the following does the text say to avoid when employing white space and improving readability?

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The text advises to avoid using longer sentences and paragraphs when trying to improve the readability of a written proposal. Instead, it suggests using white space and elements such as headings, bulleted lists, and appropriate margins to break up the text and make it easier for the reader to navigate.