What style problem exists in the following paragraph:
I began my Saturday by cooking a healthy breakfast. But first I got up, and got dressed, and walked the dog, and brushed my teeth. I made oatmeal and had blueberries. It was delicious. My dog liked the walk.
A) The sentences are not in a logical order.
B) The sentences are not consistently of the same length: some are long and some are short.
C) An average reader will not understand the adjective, "delicious," and thus the writer must use a different term.
D) Both a and b.

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Effective style includes writing effective paragraphs that have a topic sentence and supporting sentences that are arranged in a logical order. Excessive use of any writing technique, such as too many short paragraphs, too much complex information, too much use of bullets, etc. is not effective style and can be distracting to the reader and make it difficult to read or comprehend the message.

What Style Problem Exists in the Following Paragraph