Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?

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Raise should be changed to rise. The two verbs have nearly the same meaning, but raise is transitive; it requires an object. In the above sentence there is no object; the dead are raising themselves, so they are rising.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited