Which of the following sentences best illustrates effective sales writing?
A) We've introduced two new flavors for the season: spicy jalapeno and roasted garlic and herb.
B) Apollo hummus is now available in spicy jalapeno and roasted garlic and herb.
C) Spicy jalapeno and roasted garlic and herb are the two new Apollo hummus flavors to watch out for this season.
D) You can now enjoy the great taste of Apollo hummus in two new flavors-spicy jalapeno and roasted garlic and herb.
E) Our ever-loyal customer base has grown larger after the introduction of Apollo Spicy Jalapeno and Apollo Roasted Garlic and Herb.

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Choice D is the best option as it is straightforward and presents the information clearly and concisely, highlighting the new flavors of Apollo hummus. It also has a call to action, inviting the reader to try the new flavors. The other options either have redundant or unnecessary words or lack a clear call to action.

Which of the Following Sentences Best Illustrates Effective Sales Writing